I listened to it just now, and it's pretty good. I'm not very good at giving constructive criticism. I can only say that's it's pretty good overall but doesn't seem to really go anywhere (sorry if that sounds harsh!) until 'The Eternity of Stars Part 3'. That one, together with the first three tracks make up my favourites. The riff on the last song is really good. I think I've said this before, but the first two tracks remind me of very early Devin Townsend a bit, albeit without the madness.