Saying three long sentences vs saying "black ghetto girls"
I actualy said "Two black girls, dressed hood as hell". Had I just said "Two girls, dressed hood as hell", each and every one of you would have immediately assumed black. So what is worng with just confirming your suspicions?
With respect, that's nonsense! There are
plenty of mouthy, attitude-laden white girls in my neck of the woods, first instinct would be
Vicky Pollard.
But - wrong with saying black? Nothing! Valid description, leave it in. I never said to take it out, you're reading what you're expecting to read! The bits I'd have taken out would've been "About to get racial" - cos it wouldn't have if you hadn't said that - and "There are plenty of black people on campus, and I'm all for giving everyone (regardless of race) their chance, but they have already blown theirs." And like I said - best of intentions, navigating a minefield, I get that! But it's not a racial issue, it's an annoying loudmouth issue, and I'm not entirely sure why it was introduced as a racial issue, or why the black fellow a couple of tables down would be more qualified than you to deal with this kind of thing.
They're just people! It's not "white people versus black people," it's "people who are studying versus people who are being really loud." No need to make it racial. If they're being loud, that's due to their nurture rather than their nature. I don't think you're racist, I'm just not sure why so much emphasis was placed on what they are rather than who they are, like we'd think you were saying they were being mouthy
because they're black.
Again, though, I get the impression that you know all of this - I more got the sense you were worried that people would
think it was, and trying to pre-empt it. But sentences like "I'm all for giving everyone (regardless of race) their chance" do end up sounding less like "all races are equal" and more like "I'm going to be really nice and let the black thing slide." Especially when it's later justified with "Oh, you all know it's the stereotype!" No, I didn't!
Like I say, though. I'm sure it's more a foot-in-mouth thing than a hatred-in-thread thing.
ETA: Crikey! Missed a page. Just seen the post from Bosk - right! Sorry, leaving it at that. Crucial point to take away is that from where I'm standing, it seems clear that you were basically trying to do the right thing - and whether it worked or not (and I wouldn't say it entirely did) that is ultimately A Good Thing.