Vocal cover of Dream Theater's Wither - What do you think?

[NuclearAnton]

Hi!

I've been singing for a couple of years now, and been experimenting with a lot of different styles.
I've always been leaning towards rock/metal, and been the frontman of a couple of metal bands.

I'm currently a singer without a band, so I spend a lot of time playing and recording on my own, and my latest project
is a vocal cover of "Wither"!

It's not complete yet, the second half of the song is still to be recorded, but I would love to get some feedback on my progress so far!
So what do you think?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kiOpBPdvmM4

[Fiery Winds]

Really good, you have a very full voice with a great and unique tone.  I'm not sure what to think about the vibrato, as it seems a little too "perfect".  You are a little flat in some spots, but you really nailed the high part in "I breeeeeeaaaaaak down".  Great job, and keep up the good work.   

[pogoowner]

Very, very good job. You've got a great voice. A couple little pitch issues like Fiery Winds said, but I'm really very impressed.

[NuclearAnton]

Thanks a lot for the feedback!
this song is a challange since there are a lot of phrases that are high-pitched,
so it's a relief to hear someone elses opinion, since I only hear the flaws in my voice myself.

I got really sick right before christmas, possibly the swine flu, so my singing voice has been somewhat broken since,
but it's finally started to recover so I hope to be able to record the rest of the song next week!

Thanks!