Black Clouds' probably my favorite album cover of all. Might be build up with borrowed / stolen pics, but I love the themes and hope they stick to this habit.
Funny that you should pick that one out because there is a lot wrong with it, although I tried to fix those issues when I did the Black Clouds and Silver Anniversary artwork.
Could you elaborate? Both the issues and how you remedied them. With pictures, if you can.
Sure.
First and foremost is the majesty symbol, whose perspective seems off compared to the rest of the image and is even slightly cock-eyed. Not only that, but there’s really no reason for it. It just looks like an unexplained stain on the floor.
Second is the mouse, which not only doesn’t show any shading when considering the point of view of the light source (it looks like a light is shining directly on it), there’s also no shadow for it.
The shading issue of the little boy is the same. While he has an appropriate drop shadow, his back should be darker, not brightly lit. The same is true to a lesser degree with the elephant not being shaded enough (never mind how small it is and how large the books are, but I’ll give that the artistic benefit of the doubt in the same way as the giant ants on the SC cover).
Finally, the easel looks a bit odd. It has 3 legs, and there is the mast (used for adjusting the height of a painting/image), which looks like a fourth “leg” dropping down from below the all-seeing eye image; that in itself is no big deal. But if you look at the drop shadow of the mast, it looks like it is an actual fourth leg to the easel. Because the mast is not touching the floor like the 3 legs, there should be a space between it and the shadow.
So how did I resolve these issues?
(FYI, I'm using the Lifting Shadows cover because it's easier to find online and is the same thing, aside from a few of the elements being shifted around and the unicycle clown being added.)
For the majesty symbol, it made sense to make it some sort of marble inlay in the floor, so that’s what I did. And I took care to make sure that the perspective of the whole inlay was more in line with the rest of the image.
For all the elements that were placed within the image, I tried to make sure the lighting and shading was more in line with the light sources (primarily from the doorway, but also the flaming heart. I also tried to make sure the shadows were more realistic in the angle, darkness and amount of blur.
And with regards to the easel, I shortened the mast so that there was no confusion of whether it was an additional leg or not, and redid the shadow.