Nice! It had kind of a Queensryche vibe after the intro, so I was hearing those kind of vocals in my head.
I liked the catchy chorus section followed by the eerie break section with the keys/organ. Drums sound good along with bass and rhythm guitars. The guitar solo at the end with the wah seems a bit out of tune at times, that's an easy fix though with another take.
Over-all, a really cool tune with a lot of potential when polished and with vocals.