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New Pensive Song (w/emotional shred?) [JP15-7, JP2C, DSL20HR]

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ddtonfire:
This was done on an EBMM JP15-7 through a Marshall DSL20HR for rhythm and JP2C for leads, both into a Mesa 2x12. Bass was an Ibanez SR505 and acoustics were a Taylor 314ce. Recorded through a Presonus Firestudio into Logic.

One day I'll put some vocals on it. I'd love to hear any feedback about composition/performance/recording/production/mix/mastering. Hope you enjoy!

https://soundcloud.com/perfect-second/what-we-let-ourselves-become

Lonk:
Everything sounds pretty good and tight. I like this! is pretty good. I honestly don't think you need vocals (unless you already wrote them). I think this works great as an instrumental piece.

In terms of feedback: Me personally, I don't like how the drum sounds. Not saying it's bad, just my personal taste. I would have done a something different leading up to the shred part, maybe explore the neck a little more. But again, that just my personal taste, it still sounds pretty awesome.

ddtonfire:
Thank you! I'm curious, how do you like your drums to sound? That is an awesome idea to change it up a bit before it all changes, thank you for that!

Architeuthis:
Very nice!  I love how the whole song slowly builds up to the epic solo at the end. That is some great guitar work man!
 I think the song would be great with vocals. There's plenty of room for verses after the intro. Just make sure you have a good singer, that song deserves nothing less.  Awesome stuff!  :tup

cosmicwxdude:
Nice song. Good work here.

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