one stanza long song lyrics

[icysk8r]

here is a new song I wrote titled Loss.  Kind of close to me.


Lost

I do not know your name
the face that paints my dreams
obsessive over thee
I cannot have you
I’ve never met you
Where did you go?

[ZBomber]

Very nice, poetic, short, and to the point. I like it 

[icysk8r]

Very nice, poetic, short, and to the point. I like it 

Thanks, dude. =D

[Phantasmatron]

Reminds me of Frost*'s "You/I"

[icysk8r]

Reminds me of Frost*'s "You/I"

hmm, yeah, that is one stanza long too.  This is completely different subject though.

[icysk8r]

Here is the second part to the song that I just wrote, so obviously it needs a few changes.  Suggestions?

Found

Because of you, now I’m found
You escaped my grasp the first time,
but now you’ve come back around
I finally found you, and hope you’ll stay with me
for you are all I wanted, you make my life complete
You are all that matters in this scary world
And all I once thought important is now trivial
Now that you have come out of my dreams
I will love you
for eternity