Continuing on with my episode reviews...
Ep. III - Revenge of the Sith: This is the one to resolve the plot of the PT and show us Anakin's final turn. It partially succeeded and partially failed. As with the rest of the PT, this is a story that had really good bones, but where it failed, it failed in the execution and details. I'm not going to say it was a bad movie, because it was enjoyable. But the potential was there for it to be better, and it just missed, despite having a lot there to work with and the promise of delivering something truly special.
Three things that worked:
-1. Sidious/Palpatine. At least, for the first half of the film. I fall right in line with others who feel that the opera house scene is one of the best single scenes in the entire PT.
-2. The falling ship. This was taken right out of the Dark Forces II game (with some details modified to fit the different plot and characters), and it totally worked. Absent to silly R2 hijinx, this entire opening was so much fun.
-3. Order 66: *glances at watch* "It's getting kinda late in the film. I wonder how they're going to deal with setting up all the Jedi being killed off. They can't possibly deal with something so huge now with so little screen time left. I mean, Lucas couldn't possibly...
Okay, wow, that was kinda dope!"
Three things that didn't:
-1. Anakin's turning. The seeds were certainly there. But...I dunno. For as extreme a turn as he took, the final push just didn't
feel genuine. I was
told and
shown all the reasons for the conflict building in Anakin. But I didn't
feel it. And for Anakin to go so far as to buy into
exterminating the Jedi, including killing kids, there needed to be more. That chamber scene where Mace Windu showed up to challenge Palpatine needed to have something more to it for Anakin to see the Jedi as truly evil and worthy of being exterminated. That scene didn't have it.
-2. Yoda: "Hmm...couldn't defeat Palpatine 1-on-1. Best just go into exile, possibly forever."
-3. Padme's death, and the birth of Luke and Leia. We don't know exactly why she really died, and it doesn't make a lot of sense.
Minor tweaks that could have made it better: Honestly, it all basically comes down to Anakin's turn. It just didn't have the emotional impact it should have. Lucas just needed a bit more setup to show Anakin truly being manipulated and being
convinced that the Jedi truly were evil. We didn't quite get that, so his protestations about the Jedi being evil "from a certain point of view" just didn't ring true. And while I sympathized with the Padme angle, the problems with how their relationship was handled in the first two films kept me from completely buying into that as well. This is why fixing that aspect in the first two films was super important to me. So my "minor tweaks" boil down to: (1) Fix the setup with the Anakin/Padme dynamic in the first two films, because even though the relationship works MUCH better in this film, there is unresolved "emotional baggage" lingering around; (2) Do a bit more to make it appear to Anakin that Windu and the Jedi are truly up to no good and are going to plunge the galaxy into horror if not stopped
at any cost so that his turn to Vader is more convincing; (3) This may cross over into "major tweak," but Padme's death and the twins' birth needed to be completely re-done. But this could tie into #2. This is only one possible suggestion for Act 3 of the film, but it maybe fixes both problems considerably. So something along these lines: The Jedi Council learns that Padme is going to have a child who has the potential to join this unknown Sith Lord and tip the scales toward darkness (which was sort of what Palpatine reveals to be what he believes to be Luke's destiny in ROTJ). They decide to take drastic measures, unbeknownst to Anakin and Obi-Wan, and they convince Padme to leave him and go off and have the children in secret. Palpatine, in turn, uses this to manipulate Anakin and convince him that the Jedi are out to destroy everything Anakin loves and to corrupt everything, which in turn causes Anakin to flip out. He rightly thinks Obi-Wan is involved, and that Padme was also in on it, which then makes is flipping out at both of them when they come to Mustafar to try to turn him back more justified. And all the way through this, Anakin is lied to about the children. Palpatine tells him the Jedi taking Padme away caused the child to die before being born. When Padme goes back to Anakin, she maybe tells him the child died, because she fears him and his motivations, and is protecting the kids. He doesn't know that there were twins, and that they have been born and are in hiding already. This makes him killing Padme less messy, and raises the stakes considerably in his final duel with Obi-Wan, where he truly believes Obi-Wan was in on the conspiracy to take away everything from him. He would truly have a reason for the "hate" that would turn him to the dark side, even if we the audience knew all along that the reason was false and that he was being manipulated and lied to. In short, it would cover a lot of the flaws in Act 3. Heck, it would even make the "NOOOOOO!!!" a bit more palatable.