Not bad! However, as someone whose main bulk of entertainment comes via Youtube vlogs I have a bit of advice for you.
Jump cuts are your friend! They take the pressure off of you in terms of getting everything right first time. It allows you to retake again and again on a single take of film which you can edit out in post. It can also be used to lessen the moments of silence in the vlog, which are perfectly fine in natural speech, but are generally found sparingly in this medium. Here's an example of a vlogger's introduction before jump cuts.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rf3nwJgEFC0Secondly, talk a little faster or with a little more energy. This is something most seem to pick up on over time. It's a matter of engagement, plus it shows your passion for your project.
Finally, titles. They're fine if you're just wanting the DTF audience to watch your videos, however, considering that you're wanting to build up into a website eventually I'm assuming that you'll want a larger audience. Therefore, your tags, description, and title need to tell the potential audience what each video focuses on. Something as simple as
[band]:[album title] Review, for the review videos, with related tags and descriptions. By choosing a certain pool of words as well to reference in the description/title/tags, ensures that you show up higher on searches. So, say that you're doing a Queensryche review. You could mention the term Queensryche once in the title, once in the tags, and twice in the description. A lot of people on Youtube copy and paste their tags into the bottom of their description to reach a wider audience.