Overall very nice, just like your Wither cover. The low notes in the harmony lines are a little shaky sometimes, a few of the high ones show their difficulty level and aren't exactly spot on but pretty much there, more of a live performance vibe. There are a few lines where your timing is off with the vocals coming in too early which makes them feel a little awkward, but nothing major. Again, thanks for posting.
Greetings...
Nef