Really? I've only given a couple of vague comments.
Sounding better now. The intonation doesn't bother me. For some reason the rhythm in the intro is throwing me off though. At 0:19 it switches in my mind. Is that intentional or am I interpreting the beat wrong in the intro? Not saying to change anything, I'm just wondering where that mental block is coming from.
At the moment it's a total blue ball leading up to the big second half of the original track, especially after the big buildup ending at 0:32.
Hopefully it will get to that later on in your remix, because it's my favourite part of the song, and I've had the music stuck in my head all day thanks to you! I really like the beat of it so far. Maybe fatten up your bass drum and synth bass? Not sure how much you can do, but I feel like these remixes are supposed to have some doof doof to them.