I'm well aware that this thread is made specifically for a song by you fellow forum member but I thought it might be useful as a thread for all other real and wannabe musicians amongst us to post what they managed to conjure up
btw. liking your song, not really my cup of tea (as you will see by listening to my link posted below) but there are lots of nice melodies there and chord progressions
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6pGEA0Al5pg&feature=youtu.beshort description: this was not meant to be a complete composition because it happened while I was self-learning music notes, chords, time signatures, scales etc as an alternative to learning those things while playing other people's stuff (i thought why waste time on other people's music
). also this not being meant to be a complete composition it lacks in dynamics and melodies. those melodies you do hear are merely incidental as parts of different chords. the same goes for notes, they're all quaver (due to not having time to invest in melodic composition)