I made an album of electronic music

[Mat JB]

Hey guys! I recently made an album of electronic video-game style music, and thought someone here might get a kick out of it!

Any criticism and feedback would be greatly appreciated 

https://soundcloud.com/terminal-orbit/sets/the-spiral-path

[rogerdil]

Congratulations, good stuff, I like the avoidance of mere simple riffing.  The suggestions I'd make are making the album shorter (25 to 30 minutes), optimizing track order and perhaps introducing more common motifs to make the album cohere better and/or introducing more melodic "hooks" (ironically, which may involve adding more simple riffing in, to provide a counterbalance to the general, angular note flurries) to help the listener recall the songs better.

[Mat JB]

Thanks! Advice noted, I'll try to get the balance leaning more toward melodic hooks next time.