I actually think that he pulls it off quite well. Sure, a poor boy might have been less laughable, but the feeling of anguish is present in the song in such a powerful way. Plus, that solo is one of the perfect examples that Petrucci doesn't have to shred to deliver a good solo.
I just don't think the lyrics should've went into first person at all for that part. I'm sure JP could've worded it differently. I mean, heck, the FIRST time he says, "You're" so even if he's talking about a different character in the second verse, he could've said like, "She" or something.
I mean, being a Dream Theater fan,
I can let it go. But it's definitely not a lyrics that I'd be too proud to just show other people, because I just know that they'd be like, "Why did that guy just said that he's a girl?"
Yeah. Between SFAM and SDOIT, JLB sings lyrics which imply he's a female more than a few times, and I don't really see a problem with it.
There's a difference between implying it on behalf of a character like, "He always had my heart, he needs to know..."
And outright saying, "I'm just a poor girl." And there's no other part of SDOIT where he sings on behalf of a female character. About To Crash and Losing Time are both done in third person.