I like the three songs I pulled up of yours, but I guess the one thing I would have liked to have heard more of was an Eastern (or local) influence because I didn't really hear it in the songs I listened to (I forget which ones they were, two from the new album and one from the first). Lots of bands sound like Dream Theater, SyX, Metallica...and most of them don't really take off. Orphaned Land and Myrath have a nice little niche carved out by fusing metal with their own heritage and frankly I love it. They are original and a new take on metal. When I want to listen to bands like Orphaned Land, I don't really have many choices; where as when I want the Dream Theater sound, I usually reach for Dream Theater.
You just have something that most bands can't tap into and I guess I'd like to see you integrate that into your sound more. In short, I want something that is more "Pakistani Metal", and not "Metal from Pakistan". Just my two cents...I think you had a lot of good ideas musically and could benefit from better recording/production, but the talent is in place.