Over all, I thought the movie was fine. It's easier for me to pick out the little complaints I have rather than everything it did right, so here's a nitpick list:
For the first 30 minutes of the movie, I was kind of confused as to what was going on, what they were trying to accomplish, etc. That's might've just been me though. I understood later, but it would've been nice if I had understood it a bit sooner.
I think a big part was the whole business with the soldier that saved Jyn. He was barely a character, and for some reason I thought he was going to be more important, but really, he wasn't. So that confused me.
" Don't choke on your aspirations..."
This was kind of bad for me.
I was like, "Is this happening now? Darth Vader is punning?" "Don't choke on your aspirations...I don't want to
force you into an awkward position...Don't call back until you have the Rebels by the throat...Hopefully your next report will really take my breath away...
I think it could've work if he had said the line sooner or there was less of a long drawn out choking sequence. The timing was just a bit off.
And on the Deathstar blowing up that Imperial base:
Made for one hell of a cool shot, with the explosion in the background and everything.
Yeah, it's a good thing that they randomly decided to shoot a couple dozen miles outside of the base instead directly at it like on Jehda, otherwise we wouldn't have had a neat looking explosion in the background.
This:
If we are going to get picky, not sure how I feel about the Rebel Blockade Runner fleeing the actual scene of the crime where Vader was just steps from gaining entry.
It would be the equivalent to a police car chase ending with the police stopping the car, confronting the driver and the driver says "is there a problem officer?"
And then a couple of monents where there were shoehorned Star Wars(TM) things like the blue milk (omg did you see it??? Remember that?), the cantina characters, C3PO and R2 (which I think could've worked if they'd simply changed 3PO's line from "they're going to Scarif?" to "
we're going to Scarif?"), and Leia's cameo with the embarrassing smile and "hope" line. Those kinds of wink wink nudge nudge moments worked in TFA because that was like 90% of the entire movie. Not so much in this one imo.
Tarkin's face was obviously CGI. But I thought it was acceptable.