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Offline nakedman

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Nakedman's new shtuff.
« on: December 22, 2010, 11:49:49 PM »
Hello to my fav online forum! Here are two of my newest compositions. One being kind of a joke, and the other more my normal style.

This song is very Danny Elfman influenced.
Here is the more normal song

I am looking for some good criticism. I am drummer normally, but I have been trying my hand at singing/songwriting.
Thanks in advance.
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Re: Nakedman's new shtuff.
« Reply #1 on: December 23, 2010, 12:03:48 AM »
I think the electronic style actually worked for you, as most time it can sound cheesy. It had a very low-key Maps sound to it.