Song I came up with, please comment :)

[kala1928]

Worked with this for a couple of days and finally got it ok enough to publish.
https://www.mikseri.net/playsong.php?id=440098
The site is in finnish but the play-button is universal
Trying to fiddle with myspace to get a page up there too but I guess I could work on a few more tracks before doing that.
I've owned a played keyboard for a long time (first one was a crappy casio maybe 10 years ago though) and we had a piano at home when I was a child but haven't really put a great deal of effort into really learning to play and compose with keyboards, so I guess you could say this is my first real effort.
Tell me what you like of it, tell me what you don't like of it.

I also got some piano-cover stuff on youtube, not super awesome quality like Michal Worek or so but decent, check it out too if you want
https://www.youtube.com/user/akuvisuri

Going to start working on another track soon, something similar yet still different, stay tuned!

[ScioPath]

Sounds great!

[kala1928]

Too boring track for anyone else to comment?
I know you shouldn't have a long tedious intro on a 'single' track like this but oh well just wanted to use my own burning piano patch for something

[ScioPath]

Don't be discouraged. We get very low traffic in this part of the forum.