I can't quite follow this logic. You don't necessarily have to write a metal song to express that you're pissed about something.
No but considering the subject matter, comments such as "heavy for the sake of heavy" make zero sense. The lyrics and music compliment each other very well. I also don't find the song childish at all, angsty maybe, but everyone feels angst, including adults.
Cons:My main problem is with the music not the lyrics because they wrote a lot worse than that already.
The rapping is obnoxious, Portnoys input is strange to say the least on the don't watch the crooked step parts, the simple guitar riffs repeat a lot and if they don't have melodic Keyboards that accompany them (check Mirror) it sucks.
IMO and strangely enough it's the least progressive DT song even if it clocks more than 10 min.
Pros: This and the keyboard solos.
"On and on and on and on it goes
It's so easy to run away with nothing in tow
How can you ever sleep a wink at night
Pretending that everything is alright
And have the nerve to blame this mess on me
Never in my life have I seen someone
So ignorant to the damage he has done
You're the rotted root in the family tree
I tried your 4 bill therapy
I tried to make amends
But nothing could lure you out of your selfish shell again
Expecting everyone to bow and kiss your feet
Don't you see respect is not a one way street
Blaming everyone for all that you've done wrong
I'll get my peace of mind when you hear this song
On and on and on and on it goes
And with every passing day true colors show"