Just listened to the 'Cake' song. I really hate to criticize the hard work that someone puts into something like this because, even though I don't care for some of it, I completely understand the hard work and dedication that goes into creating it. So, let's start with the good:
- it's tight
- the production isn't bad, although the guitars (and overall sound) could be fuller. The guitars are a little buried and the vocals are WAY too loud in my opinion
- the riffs are pretty cool
- the CLEAN singing is actually pretty good and I love the parts when that singing is going on
- nice solos, but way too soft and maybe a little too dry.... some delay would be nice on the tone.
THE BAD:
- stupid, cookie monster vocals. Someone hit the nail on the head when they said, "it's trying too hard to sound like what it's "supposed" to sound like." Everyone and their grandmother has a band and a singer like this now and they ALL SOUND THE SAME. What you did here doesn't sound any 'worse' than most of those bands, but most of that stuff sucks to begin with and it's overdone. I, for one, am tired of it. It's kind of like, in the 80's, everyone had to have a really high voice with an amazing vibrato, then in the 90's everyone had to sound like Kurt Cobain..... now everyone has to do this screaming crap.
- the song doesn't go anywhere at all
- can't understand the lyrics, so I have no idea how deep the song's meaning is