As of yet, I haven't recorded the vocals. The lousy piano is replacing it in the (demo) track.
I'm by no means a drummer, or a keyboardist for that matter.
Comments, critique, everything is welcome
https://www.box.net/shared/vabnpjq2s7Currently the lyrics are as follows:
The world is so strange now, I can't explain it.
I lived a different one.
The future so bright now, nearing, nearing, as time is running out.
Days and weeks seem interchangeable.
Hours minutes, seconds instable.
Wake me from this nightmare.
This life is somewhat too strange to be real.
I don't know that I'm dreaming a reality created by myself.
Instable is hardly used now, but it 'sounds' better than
unstable, to me, that is.
The lyrics are average at best, but well, it's my first 'complete' song. Or a song that has structure.
Also, yes, it sounds like:
Starfox: Asteroid Belt, SNES
Are You Afraid Of The Dark?: the theme, TV-series
The New Math (What He Said): somewhere into the song, OSI
Fatal Tragedy: and Dream Theater in general
Bye,
Mano
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