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Offline Pyro

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My attempt at Erotomania
« on: February 24, 2010, 02:54:25 AM »
Hello there. I'm pretty new to the forum here so dont wanna be too cheaky but thought you guys might wanna give my Erotomania cover a look. I think it came out ok but you guys are probably the best to ask

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DtkUqT5ZsPM

Offline Fiery Winds

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Re: My attempt at Erotomania
« Reply #1 on: February 24, 2010, 11:47:36 AM »
Nice chops!  My only suggestion would be on improving your vibrato.  I noticed it wasn't very wide, so it sounded like some notes were just hanging there.  Great job!   :metal

Offline Pyro

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Re: My attempt at Erotomania
« Reply #2 on: February 24, 2010, 12:51:41 PM »
Yeah, i see what you mean. Some of the notes suffer and sound a bit stale. Thanks for looking