Not bad man. It looks like you get most of the notes themselves right, but what I would recommend is spending more time getting the true feel of what you are trying to play. Don't play the notes, play the emotions. Also make sure to spend plenty of time on any fast tapping/picking to make sure you can nail it cleanly without distortion, and to make sure you are hitting every note just at the right moment.
Good job!
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