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Offline sneakyblueberry

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A song by me! Come and listen!
« on: January 31, 2010, 04:31:08 AM »
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Here's a little song that I wrote and recorded all on my own.  Its not very proggy, but there is some of that to come.  I tend to just write whatever my brain wants to write when I sit down, whatever comes out, comes out.  Please give it a listen and let me know what you think.  Its pretty much about whats going on in my life now with my leukaemia and being weak from chemo and all that disgusting stuff and just being desperate for... solace, peace, health.  All that good stuff I suppose.  Anyway.  Feel free to ask any questions about anything.

Lyrics if anyone is interested:

V1

"Breathe", she said
"Its not easy so try again.
Your body will wither down as it enters in"
I could sit and watch as the Son of Man
Wanders freely among this land,
Or I could try in my desperation to touch His hand.

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Deep cries out to deep
In the roar of your waterfalls.
All your waves and breakers
Are sweeping over me.

V2

Blood, too bright.
Too much sleep and not much fight.
Too weak to run, too blind to see the end.
Lord, I need you to speak to me,
I am here won't you speak with me?
Cos I need more than this medication I'm drowning in.

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Re: A song by me! Come and listen!
« Reply #1 on: February 01, 2010, 12:44:24 AM »
I really like your voice in the verses!

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Re: A song by me! Come and listen!
« Reply #2 on: February 03, 2010, 11:12:39 PM »
Thanks man!  I really enjoyed your layered vocals on that wintery song.  Very nice.

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Re: A song by me! Come and listen!
« Reply #3 on: February 04, 2010, 06:30:27 PM »
Thanks, but you definitely have a more developed tone than I have when it comes to this style. Write more stuff!