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Title: First few pages of script for our youtube comedy show. Possibly offensive to all
Post by: MetalJunkie on May 03, 2017, 02:03:18 PM

I'm new at the whole "writing a script" thing, but my friends and I have decided we want to try our hand at a youtube sketch comedy show. This is obviously several months out, but it all stems from an idea I had. I have the first few pages knocked out that shows our concept for the first skit. May be offensive to anyone and everyone.

(https://i.imgur.com/5C1d0lY.png)

Link if you can't get it to resize: https://i.imgur.com/5C1d0lY.png (https://i.imgur.com/5C1d0lY.png)

Title: Re: First few pages of script for our youtube comedy show. Possibly offensive to all
Post by: cramx3 on May 03, 2017, 02:09:33 PM

 :lol Good luck with this, I like where this one sketch is going.  I've had so many ideas for sketches to make for youtube, but making a full blown sketch with actors is a bit out of my league and time frame, but writing out a script is a good starting point.  Do you have the rest of this storyline planned out?  What about other sketches?  Name for this?

Title: Re: First few pages of script for our youtube comedy show. Possibly offensive to all
Post by: PB1 on May 09, 2017, 08:46:12 AM

 LOL!! Sounds like you've got some great ideas! A fresh take on some classic comedic tropes.  :rollin post more of the script, this is great stuff

Title: Re: First few pages of script for our youtube comedy show. Possibly offensive to all
Post by: MetalJunkie on May 09, 2017, 10:12:13 AM

I'm re-writing as I write it. Here's a revised edition of the last few pages.

(https://i.imgur.com/CTiiyKV.png)
https://i.imgur.com/CTiiyKV.png

Title: Re: First few pages of script for our youtube comedy show. Possibly offensive to all
Post by: Ben_Jamin on May 09, 2017, 03:58:06 PM

Haha...that's great. The added stuff too makes it more great as well.