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Title: Can I Get Some Feedback?
Post by: ANightmareToRemember on August 28, 2011, 10:22:30 PM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ev0F2tqUtrY

Just a sample of a song I'm currently working on, I was hoping I could get some feedback. Much appreciated guys! :metal

Title: Re: Can I Get Some Feedback?
Post by: Adami on August 29, 2011, 12:41:39 PM

It was cool I guess. Not really much going on, but you seem to be rather into Meshuggah and I'm not, so maybe I'm not the intended audience.

Title: Re: Can I Get Some Feedback?
Post by: goldfalcon on August 30, 2011, 09:11:22 AM

I dig it.  Very ugly sounding.  I like. :)  Plans to go on top of this?  Lyrics, lead lines?

Alex

Title: Re: Can I Get Some Feedback?
Post by: yeshaberto on August 30, 2011, 11:19:48 AM

I liked it.  I especially like the background that comes in about 50s

Title: Re: Can I Get Some Feedback?
Post by: OsMosis2259 on September 01, 2011, 12:36:35 AM

Drums sound awesome. Programmed?

Yeah it should def. sound more intense with the guitars doubled (stereo). Sounds good tho so far!

Title: Re: Can I Get Some Feedback?
Post by: obscure on September 01, 2011, 01:27:20 AM

Not bad  :tup

Title: Re: Can I Get Some Feedback?
Post by: ANightmareToRemember on September 05, 2011, 09:59:56 PM

Thank you kindly for the replies, friends! This is just a small sample of the album I'm currently recording, it's a concept album called Stepping Through The Shattered Fragments of Time, and the song that clip is from is not entitled Sanctuary To The Fallen. I'll leave you guys with a demo of the title track(I wrote some extra parts, rearranged some things, etc after I recorded this) Nonetheless, you should get a decent idea of the lighter side of the album  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bRZcRMO15iE

Edit: Yes there will be additional guitar parts and vocals in Sanctuary, it's an 11 minute song  ;) And also, yes, the drums are programmed.

Title: Re: Can I Get Some Feedback?
Post by: kiwiclapton on September 15, 2011, 04:18:08 AM

Chur!

Title: Re: Can I Get Some Feedback?
Post by: kirksnosehair on October 01, 2011, 07:10:57 AM

Not bad, I hear opeth and meshugga influences,   one suggestion I'd toss out is try throwing in a measure of 5/4 here and there, just to build tension and keep the listener on his toes.

Title: Re: Can I Get Some Feedback?
Post by: black_biff_stadler on October 04, 2011, 02:35:18 AM

I dug it. Now all we need is Killer Instinct 3 to be made so this can be in the final boss stage.