It's pretty good; well-played. I like the drum pattern in the verses, especially when it comes out of the double-bass lick; there's a beat there that's not repeated later in the breakdown. The guitars are good, if a shade nondescript. Almost 90% of the time, when I hear an up and coming band that is trying to get to the next level, the weak point is... the vocals. And that's no different here. I'm not a fan of the growls, but I get it, it's a part of music, and I can accept it for what it is. Here, it's tastefully done, and along with the repeated double bass riff, gives the song a sort of schizo-phrenic quality, in a good way. It's the Green Day-ish, punk-ish (which is my touch stone; yours may be different) clean vocals that sort of ruin it for me. I'd have to hear this song in the context of an album or setlist to see what the intended direction is. I'm not a huge fan of affected singing, unless it's part of a bigger picture and I can't get this from the one song.