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Offline Super Dude

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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #210 on: July 09, 2011, 06:45:13 AM »
Quote from: sonatafanica on July 08, 2011, 02:49:51 PM
Quote from: Super Dude on July 08, 2011, 02:26:40 PM
Wow, the poetry in this thread is awesome.  I just wrote a poem for my girlfriend, and I would love to share it, but it's kinda personal.

then post one you didn't write for her



unless you're one of those guys that only writes poems for girls

:P

Just to prove you wrong, here's one I wrote a couple years ago:

Watch the sun rise

Streaks of daylight pour through
the cold stone mouths of the Celtic archways.

A young girl and her flock wanders
to the riverside at the lower point of the
valley.  The walls of the Highland mountains
are guarded by a fearsome god.

There is no sound but
the wind gliding through the great basin.
The cloud’s above sail indifferently past.
The sheep start to scatter,
the dog nips them back.
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #211 on: July 12, 2011, 01:14:46 AM »
Sweet amber leaf

Hello there
Sweet amber leaf
Flowing in the wind
You have talked to me yesterday
You told me of how you have stayed
in the same
world for far too long
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #212 on: July 12, 2011, 09:53:19 AM »
That's beautiful, man.
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #213 on: July 18, 2011, 07:50:25 AM »
I never write poetry. I wrote this one this morning for my new lady friend who loves poetry. Not sure how well it's going to do lol.






I look into her eyes
Just for a little while
No need to make up lies
And all I can do is smile

She cracks me with a towel
I drop her to the floor
On my arm she brands a vowel
I still want to see her more

Penguins, sharks, and turtles
One of the best days in years
I'm not saying there's no hurdles
But I want to face my fears

Your dad scares me a little
Your mom seems to approve
It really sucks your in the middle 
And I'm dreading the day you move

Don't care what people say
Deep down you know whats true
Take another train to Back Bay
So I can spend another day with you






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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #214 on: July 18, 2011, 09:24:51 AM »
yes yes poetry that is what poetry is it is for getting into girl's pants mhm
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #215 on: July 18, 2011, 11:14:33 AM »
I walked into the room last night
you were not there
yet
it smelled fresh and new

can we last together
in this new room.
will the fruit of it's life rot
with your prescence

in the new room
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #216 on: July 19, 2011, 08:43:10 AM »
Walking Haiku

My neighborhood lies
Motionless and unyielding
So I walk on by
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #218 on: July 19, 2011, 09:51:48 PM »
best one in a while
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #219 on: July 22, 2011, 02:22:06 AM »
The time has arrived
Are you ready to ask the sun
"Am I forgiven?
Am I forsaken?
Am I misguided?"

Adventures of a lonely mind
Stuck in an endless cycle
In this state,
he couldn't control himself
he would stand
lost in a trance
headbanged against the furniture.

Recognizable scenary forms a conscious dream.

The time has arrived
Are you ready to ask the sun
"Am I living?
Am I dying?
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #220 on: July 22, 2011, 02:27:08 AM »
Chat Thread 2112 Haiku

I was the poster
Number twenty one and twelve
What is my prize, then?
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #221 on: July 27, 2011, 03:17:12 AM »
umm... Dear Master Shake,
I regret to inform you
you dont win anything
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I just don't understand what they were trying to achieve with any part of the song, either individually or as a whole. You know what? It's the Platypus of Dream Theater songs. That bill doesn't go with that tail, or that strange little furry body, or those webbed feet, and oh god why does it have venomous spurs!? And then you find out it lays eggs too. The difference is that the Platypus is somehow functional despite being a crazy mishmash or leftover animal pieces

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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #222 on: July 27, 2011, 03:21:22 AM »
Your haiku is good
Except for one small detail
Extra syllable
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #223 on: July 27, 2011, 03:23:13 AM »
I completely spaced
I had something else in mind
but i forgot it
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I just don't understand what they were trying to achieve with any part of the song, either individually or as a whole. You know what? It's the Platypus of Dream Theater songs. That bill doesn't go with that tail, or that strange little furry body, or those webbed feet, and oh god why does it have venomous spurs!? And then you find out it lays eggs too. The difference is that the Platypus is somehow functional despite being a crazy mishmash or leftover animal pieces

-BlobVanDam on "Scarred"

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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #224 on: July 27, 2011, 03:26:57 AM »
That one's successful
It follows correct meter
You get a cookie
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #225 on: July 27, 2011, 03:29:52 AM »
Oh I love cookies
why yes sir I really do
Kel loves orange soda
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I just don't understand what they were trying to achieve with any part of the song, either individually or as a whole. You know what? It's the Platypus of Dream Theater songs. That bill doesn't go with that tail, or that strange little furry body, or those webbed feet, and oh god why does it have venomous spurs!? And then you find out it lays eggs too. The difference is that the Platypus is somehow functional despite being a crazy mishmash or leftover animal pieces

-BlobVanDam on "Scarred"

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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #226 on: July 27, 2011, 03:31:57 AM »
Soda that is orange
Is loved very much by I
Though Kel loves it more
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #227 on: July 27, 2011, 03:36:41 AM »
I now have an urge
to sit andwatch the antics
of Kenan and Kel
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I just don't understand what they were trying to achieve with any part of the song, either individually or as a whole. You know what? It's the Platypus of Dream Theater songs. That bill doesn't go with that tail, or that strange little furry body, or those webbed feet, and oh god why does it have venomous spurs!? And then you find out it lays eggs too. The difference is that the Platypus is somehow functional despite being a crazy mishmash or leftover animal pieces

-BlobVanDam on "Scarred"

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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #228 on: July 27, 2011, 03:40:31 AM »
I'd like to as well
The X-factor fills my ears
To cure my boredom
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #229 on: July 27, 2011, 03:43:57 AM »
I can't think of much
else to contribute to this
epic word battle
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I just don't understand what they were trying to achieve with any part of the song, either individually or as a whole. You know what? It's the Platypus of Dream Theater songs. That bill doesn't go with that tail, or that strange little furry body, or those webbed feet, and oh god why does it have venomous spurs!? And then you find out it lays eggs too. The difference is that the Platypus is somehow functional despite being a crazy mishmash or leftover animal pieces

-BlobVanDam on "Scarred"

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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #230 on: July 27, 2011, 03:52:10 AM »
Alright then, my friend.
I hope you get china soon.
It would be awesome!
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #231 on: July 27, 2011, 04:13:41 PM »
Crumbling to Yellow Sand

Everywhere I go I hear a name
Scrawled on the wind
Whispered on a thread
I feel it on the backs of my scorched eyelids,
Its cinnamon scent coloring my fingertips

This is not about you.

I believe it may have started that way
When I followed your errant tracks over the dunes and into a new country
Thinking it marvelous,
While just as easily you wandered back out

Those times are crumbling to yellow sand now
But still your name stifles the dust around me

Sometimes I think back to how it began
I see myself bright and young, much wiser than now
Striding through the desert sea
While all around the monoliths stared down
It was as the clock struck twilight that I saw you
And I marked you by your pentagram as I am marked by mine,
Though you did not see it

I fear in that journey I left my water behind

In the between-times I thought your name a wondrous concoction,
And I grew drunk on it til the stars blistered the earth
Now, though
It fills my lungs with the shattered bones of ancient cities
I have become short of breath
The desert remembers me too well

You couldn't find me now even if you so desired

Still I wonder how your name came to be written
Within each and every coconut husk
I think perhaps I wrote it there

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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #232 on: July 27, 2011, 05:13:29 PM »
Sorry guyz...... its long....


Soulful Reflections, Nightmare Projections


Pt 1: Hello (Forever True)

Hello
You don’t know me
But I know you
Wanna go see
What we can do?
I find it hard to sit still
Because there’s a hole in my heart
That I know you can fill.

Come with me
Let me show you what love is
And you will see
The true meaning of happiness
Close your eyes
Imagine me there with you
Let in the light
And know I will never leave you

I love you
And you will too
I’ll grow on you
My love is forever true

Don’t speak
No more words
Don’t cry
No more tears
Don’t run
No more running away
Just sit in my arms
I will steer you of pain and harm

I will always be by your side
To drive your fears back to where they hide
And if you still want me here
After I release your fears
This is where I will remain
Through the cold and the rain
Because I love you, through and through
These words I say are forever true

Pt 2: Blood Rose

I give my heart to you
I give it all to you
In this dark romance
Dark embrace
I give you a blood rose
No body else needs to know

Oh no one needs to know

Hide the scars in your soul
With the pedals of this rose
I’ll love you till the end of my days
If you hold me through this rain and haze

Oh no one needs to know

Baby you’ve nothing to fear
for I will always be here
I give you this blood rose
Just promise me that no one else knows


Pt 3: Loving Embrace

A fork in the road
Which direction do you choose?
Do you go left, where you find me?
Or right, where I find you.
How about you cut through the middle
Meet me half way
Loving embrace
In each other’s arms we stay
‘Till our hair turns gray

But if I broke down in your arms
And cried through the night
Would you hold me?
And tell me it’s all right?
And if thoughts of suicide
Roam through my head
And I thought myself better off dead
Would you still hold me through the night?
And tell me it will be all right?
If I give you my heart and ask you to keep it safe,
Would you let go of this loving embrace?

I ask for your love, nothing more
Hand in hand, we can fight this war
And if you tell me your secrets
Wrap them in lace
I swear to you I wont let go
Of this loving embrace

Pt 4: Forever True (reprise)
Forever true
Forever together
Our love can’t be severed
Oh, if only I knew.

Pt 5: Who Am I (Part One: Transformation)

What is happening to me?
What have I become?
Blinded by anger, I still can’ believe
This transformation has begun

Can you tell me?
What is happening to me?

I walk the streets, thirsting for blood
But my eyes set on love
Wandering in the twilight
Wondering if I’m all right
Looking for you, what can I do?
Eyes are bloodshot
Mind full of twisted thoughts
I’m drunk with fear
Of you, and you’re the only cure

Can you tell me?
What is happening to me?

Living in a constant rage
Tired of living locked in this cage
You see this fiend that society has made?
It kills me every time I hear myself say:
Who am I?

Pt 6: Safe In A World Of Dreams?

These four walls
Insanity closing in on me
Trapped in this stall
Won’t you come and save me?

Claustrophobia takes it’s rightful place in my mind
Pull me from this eternal maze of space and time
I need to break free from this hell
Pull me out of this fucking shell
Suddenly I’m overcome
With new hope, new life
With feelings of freedom
And possibilities of flight

Wings form
In my mind
I learn to fly
To escape the norm
To leave reality behind
To be come blind
Of society’s insanity

I escape, to a world unseen
I am Safe In A World Of Dreams.

Pt 7: Echoes From My Past (Dream)

Impossibilities seem endless
Love set astray
A never-ending drift
You keep pushing me away
I sit alone listening to a dream
In the sanctuary of my mind
Safe and serene
I close my eyes
And become blind
To life’s despair and lies

Numb
No longer able to feel
At peace
Life no longer seems real

Echoes from my past begin to haunt my mind
I begin to quiver, unable to find
The tranquility I once knew
For in my minds eye, I see you
I open my eyes and begin to scream
I am no longer Safe In A World Of Dreams

Pt 8: Who Am I (Part 2: Blame)

I cant breath
Fear. It is strangling me
Round my neck
Like a tourniquet
Cutting the flow
I just want you to know
There is nothing anyone can do
Except you
You know how to tame the beast within
Please don’t let my life end

Why is this happening to me?
Why am I spiraling out of control?
Why has my pulse begun to slow?
Why do I bring everybody to shame?
Who is truly to blame?

Who am I?

Pt 9: Forever Poisoned

In the blackest of nights
Void of the midsummer’s moon
Nothing seems all right
I know I will be seeing you soon

I hide beneath the stars
But these celestial witnesses
Cannot hide these scars
My mind is warped and twisted,
Ashamed and disgraced
By this unavoidable fate.

Forever haunted
Forever in fear
Forever poisoned
You are no longer the cure

Where do I run?
Where do I hide?
I know the new morning’s sun
Will not be by my side
I turn my head
And see you there
All is said
With your penetrating stare

Forever haunted
Forever in fear
Forever poisoned
You are no longer the cure

Pt 10: Dream (reprise)

I close my eyes and return
To the peace and serenity I once knew
For in my mind’s eye
I see you

Numb
Yet still able to feel
At peace
I know this isn’t real

Pt 11: Who Am I (Part 3)

Who am I?
Has life been a lie?
In the darkness I lay
Constantly wondering why
No matter how hard I try
I will never see bluer skies

Pt 12: Let It Rain
I sit in the cold
I sit all alone
Waiting for the rain
Waiting for the tears to pour
Love. Love is lost
And it hurts like never before

Let it rain.
Let it rain
Let it rain tonight
In the morning will things be all right?
Let it rain tonight.

Pt 13: Without You

Come forth as I confess my sins
This is where my life ends
Love and anger spread within
Emotions, stretched too thin
Please tell me you are able to see
This fear growing inside me


Without you here
I’ll open a bottle and drink my life away
Without you, why should I fucking care?
This is such a beat up life, so why stay?
Memories of you, drown my thoughts
You know I am lost without you
You know I’m gonna die without you

Tell me there is nothing to fear
Tell me you will always be here

As it rains, I think of you
And all the shit we went through
I want to look into your eyes, but they aren’t the same
It makes me wonder which of us is to blame
I guess fall wasn’t our season
Like it was last year
Please give me a reason
To relinquish all of my fears
And extinguish all of my doubts
Your love, I cant live without

Tell me these nightmares aren’t real
Tell me its okay, okay to feel
Tell me something, before it’s too late
Tell me something, before I seal my fate

Another soul lost to the midnight air
I will pay the cost, to leave this despair
I don’t know where to turn
My heart burns cold
Life is no longer a concern
My life has been sold

Tell me you haven’t gone away
Tell me what I’ve done wrong
Tell me you will stay
Tell me to be strong

Kissed by the darkness within
I fall to my knees waiting for it to begin
Begging you please forgive this final sin
Forever isn’t forever because today is the end
I hold this knife in my bloody hands
I’m on the edge, this is my final stand
I swear I did all that I can
But in the end I am only a man
I drown in this self-inflicted pain
I wont let your lies decide
My life, my death, my suicide!

Pt 14: The Edge

Screaming all alone
Knife in hand, I plunge into myself
When I realize that the knife is gone
Instead it’s in you, you’re on the ledge
I grab for you. You fall
Your whispered words
Your final
I love you more
And I fall too

Pt 15: Through Time and Space (Awakening)

“Through time and space
I walk to see your shining face
Past life and death
To feel your hello’s breath”

It was all a dream.
You never left me
To drown in misery
These Soulful reflections
These Nightmare projections
Were never real
I can still feel.
Forever true
Me and you

“Still I stay,
Day after day
But being alone,
You are my only home”

You are my blue skies on a rainy day
You chase all my fears away
In eachothers arms, we stay
Together we live out each day

“Without your smile
I never would have walked the past miles
With out your tears,
I never would have survived the past years
With tears like rain
I know you will be there through the pain”

Our hearts, one
Our love cannot be undone
As long as I can hear your words
And feel your breath
Everything else seems absurd
And I no longer fear death
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I just don't understand what they were trying to achieve with any part of the song, either individually or as a whole. You know what? It's the Platypus of Dream Theater songs. That bill doesn't go with that tail, or that strange little furry body, or those webbed feet, and oh god why does it have venomous spurs!? And then you find out it lays eggs too. The difference is that the Platypus is somehow functional despite being a crazy mishmash or leftover animal pieces

-BlobVanDam on "Scarred"

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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #233 on: July 28, 2011, 10:17:30 PM »
Because of a pic
I saw on the single's board
I've a John Boehner
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #234 on: July 28, 2011, 10:27:04 PM »
I guess it is time
To start this game again, Huh?
I would John Boehner
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I just don't understand what they were trying to achieve with any part of the song, either individually or as a whole. You know what? It's the Platypus of Dream Theater songs. That bill doesn't go with that tail, or that strange little furry body, or those webbed feet, and oh god why does it have venomous spurs!? And then you find out it lays eggs too. The difference is that the Platypus is somehow functional despite being a crazy mishmash or leftover animal pieces

-BlobVanDam on "Scarred"

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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #235 on: July 28, 2011, 10:28:56 PM »
So it's on, my friend!
We both lust for her body;
Mind a compromise? 
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #236 on: July 28, 2011, 10:37:33 PM »
you can go for it
cuz bitch I got me Minecraft
forever alone
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I just don't understand what they were trying to achieve with any part of the song, either individually or as a whole. You know what? It's the Platypus of Dream Theater songs. That bill doesn't go with that tail, or that strange little furry body, or those webbed feet, and oh god why does it have venomous spurs!? And then you find out it lays eggs too. The difference is that the Platypus is somehow functional despite being a crazy mishmash or leftover animal pieces

-BlobVanDam on "Scarred"

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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #237 on: July 28, 2011, 10:41:22 PM »
That's fine and dandy
Since I doubt I will meet her
Thank Jeebus for pr0n
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #238 on: July 28, 2011, 10:44:20 PM »
pr0n is always good
stumbleupon is good too
i like me some boobs
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I just don't understand what they were trying to achieve with any part of the song, either individually or as a whole. You know what? It's the Platypus of Dream Theater songs. That bill doesn't go with that tail, or that strange little furry body, or those webbed feet, and oh god why does it have venomous spurs!? And then you find out it lays eggs too. The difference is that the Platypus is somehow functional despite being a crazy mishmash or leftover animal pieces

-BlobVanDam on "Scarred"

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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #239 on: July 28, 2011, 10:45:33 PM »
I know of a site
that's totally free and has
a shitload of pics
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #240 on: July 28, 2011, 11:21:49 PM »
Can you feel the scars in my voice?
Can you hear the tears in my heart?
Don’t lie to me
Just please don’t lie to me

Why did you even show up?
What was the point?
You brought me to heaven
You gave me a new life
You brought me the cup

But what happened?
Where did you go?
Why did you leave me?
Why don’t you answer?

“Love” is a nice word
Too nice for this
You tore me to pieces and just walked away
Your radiance dried my soul
I don’t call that “love”

You’ve ruined my life
Please go away now
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"All great works are prepared in the desert, including the redemption of the world. The precursors, the followers, the Master Himself, all obeyed or have to obey one and the same law. Prophets, apostles, preachers, martyrs, pioneers of knowledge, inspired artists in every art, ordinary men and the Man-God, all pay tribute to loneliness, to the life of silence, to the night." - A. G. Sertillanges

Offline JayOctavarium

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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #241 on: July 28, 2011, 11:23:17 PM »
me and my buddies
are watching vids and making fun
of fucking Mustaine
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I just don't understand what they were trying to achieve with any part of the song, either individually or as a whole. You know what? It's the Platypus of Dream Theater songs. That bill doesn't go with that tail, or that strange little furry body, or those webbed feet, and oh god why does it have venomous spurs!? And then you find out it lays eggs too. The difference is that the Platypus is somehow functional despite being a crazy mishmash or leftover animal pieces

-BlobVanDam on "Scarred"

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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #242 on: July 28, 2011, 11:24:18 PM »
I'm on DTF
posting picture of thick girls
in the singles thread
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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #243 on: July 28, 2011, 11:30:03 PM »
there's a chat thread guys
but it matters not
because this thread blows
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Offline MasterShakezula

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Re: Official Poetry Thread
« Reply #244 on: July 28, 2011, 11:33:17 PM »
the first line has five
then the second has seven
it ends with five more
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