Complete the verse of Beneath The Surface!

[wasteland]

We all listened to the song. Many said it's gold, others said it's shit (not on this forum, fortunately). I, for me, loved those freaking fifty-nine seconds, and I'm looking forward to listening to the whole piece. Anyway, what really bothered me (and that's another reason I'm impatiently waiting for the complete song) is the way the snippet was cut at the end. Lyrically:

And you disappeared into the darkness,

and the darkness turned to pain, and never went away,

until all that remained was buried deep beneath the surface...

I would scream just to be heard,

as if yelling at the stars,

I would //


So, basically now you have to pick up the pen from JP's massive hand and write in petruccian style one or more line(s) to bring that beautiful verse to a proper end.

Come on, I know there is plenty of poets here on DTF, let's see if someone here manages to deliver a better conclusion than John's!

[Ħ]

I would dream just to be pure,
Drifting from afar

[Mat JB]

I would dive into a herd
of crashing melon carts

[fibreoptix]

  ^^

[alirocker08]

I would introduce you to,
My brother

[DarkLord_Lalinc]

I would like to thank God
luckily, everyone survived.



roar. (falsetto style)

[chknptpie]

I would build you up, butter cup. Just to let you down.

[Ben_Jamin]

I would scream at the sky
From afar.

[Mosh]

I would walk to the door
and see Kevin Moore

[Jamesman42]

roar. (falsetto style)

haha this is funnier than it should be

[fibreoptix]

I would smile and I'd learn to pretend.

[ResultsMayVary]

Read the title as "complete version of Beneath The Surface." 

[Jaffa]

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would make myself be known
Then I’d tear myself apart

... I don't know.  Doesn't fit the uplifting tone at all, but it was the first thing that occurred to me.

After that, some slightly less-than-serious ones.

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would strain my poor old lungs
Til they heard me up on Mars
___

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would rest my tired voice
By hitting up a bunch of bars
___

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would drown beneath the surface
Til I started seeing stars

[The Silent Cody]

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would blow myself
Then I'd kill my dog and rape my parrot

I just couldn't stop myself from writing that...

[Ultimetalhead]

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would walk 500 miles
and I would walk 500 more
Just to be that man who walked 1000 miles to fall down at your door

[toro]

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would walk 500 miles
and I would walk 500 more
Just to be that man who walked 1000 miles to fall down at your door

[The Silent Cody]

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would walk 500 miles
and I would walk 500 more
Just to be that man who walked 1000 miles to fall down at your door

[Jaffa]

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would walk 500 miles
and I would walk 500 more
Just to be that man who walked 1000 miles to fall down at your door

[Marion Crane]

"I would cut my hair off for all to see, just like on Falling Into Infinity"

[Pols Voice]

I would turn into a bear
And then binge on mallomars

[GasparXR]

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would raise the knife
To a picture of a life

[Zook]

I would sooner take my life away than live with drowning you.... BENEATH THE SURFAAAAAAAAAAAAAACE!!!

[predator13]

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would eat your ass and balls
If you left this band forever

[emindead]

WTF? How come Aniland didn't come up with the idea of this thread?

[wilgod3p]

I would dream all of my beard

[tri.ad]

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would walk 500 miles
and I would walk 500 more
Just to be that man who walked 1000 miles to fall down at your door

Magnificent.

[Metrovarium]

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would stop this flame from burning
FOREVERMORE
INTO THE NIGHT
BLISTERING

[BlobVanDam]

And you disappeared into the darkness,
and the darkness turned to pain, and never went away,
until all that remained was buried deep beneath the surface
I would scream just to be heard
as if yelling at the stars
WHOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
WHHOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
WHHOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

[wasteland]

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would stop this flame from burning
FOREVERMORE
INTO THE NIGHT
BLISTERING

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would put my wheels
in COOONSTANT MOTIOON...

[Millais]

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would walk 500 miles
and I would walk 500 more
Just to be that man who walked 1000 miles to fall down at your door

*bows*

[djentlemen]

I would scream just to be heard,

as if yelling at the stars, I would open the door
get on the floor
everyone walk the dinosaur

[Psy]

I would introduce you to,
My brother

Damn! Beat me to the punch.

[Setebos]

I would eat a sandwich.

[Apricot]

I would scream just to be heard
As if yelling at the stars
I would like to tell you how
This is all a hoax, Portnoy is still our drummer right now.

ROARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

[Metabog]

I would INTO THE NIGHT BLISTERING.