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Offline MetalJunkie

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I'm new at the whole "writing a script" thing, but my friends and I have decided we want to try our hand at a youtube sketch comedy show. This is obviously several months out, but it all stems from an idea I had. I have the first few pages knocked out that shows our concept for the first skit. May be offensive to anyone and everyone.



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 :lol Good luck with this, I like where this one sketch is going.  I've had so many ideas for sketches to make for youtube, but making a full blown sketch with actors is a bit out of my league and time frame, but writing out a script is a good starting point.  Do you have the rest of this storyline planned out?  What about other sketches?  Name for this?

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 LOL!! Sounds like you've got some great ideas! A fresh take on some classic comedic tropes.  :rollin post more of the script, this is great stuff

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I'm re-writing as I write it. Here's a revised edition of the last few pages.


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Haha...that's great. The added stuff too makes it more great as well.
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