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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection
« Reply #70 on: November 26, 2013, 04:17:20 PM »
Duncan pulls lonestar out of the burning building that he caused with bacon grease.
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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection
« Reply #71 on: November 26, 2013, 04:35:45 PM »
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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection
« Reply #72 on: November 26, 2013, 04:37:39 PM »
Duncan uses [insert random magic type here] to summon Aqros to put out the fire.
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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection
« Reply #73 on: November 26, 2013, 06:09:34 PM »
Duncan all of a sudden remembers he has to take a massive leak from an epic drinking binge the previous night, and....well....puts the fire out, pissing on the baby dragon responsible for it in the process.
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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection
« Reply #74 on: November 26, 2013, 06:12:25 PM »
Duncan all of a sudden remembers he has to take a massive leak from an epic drinking binge the previous night, and....well....puts the fire out, pissing on off the baby dragon responsible for it in the process.

This works too
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"The quantity of money becomes to an ever greater degree its sole effective quality. Just as it reduces everything to its abstract form, so it reduces itself in the course of its own movement to quantitative being. Excess and intemperance come to be its true norm."

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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection
« Reply #75 on: November 26, 2013, 07:11:50 PM »
Don't want to rain on anyone's parade here, but the idea is that you decide what Duncan does, and I decide what happens in the world :lol

You guys can't write the entire thing for me after all :P

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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection
« Reply #76 on: November 27, 2013, 12:58:18 PM »
The art looks fantastic, as usual. Crazy to think about how much better this looks than before even though it was pretty awesome before. You've got some major talent.  :tup
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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection
« Reply #77 on: November 27, 2013, 02:46:30 PM »
Thanks so much! I have evolved a lot as an artist since the original, that's for sure.

I'm really liking how Chapter 2 is turning out so far. I made a fire brush in Photoshop to speed up the process of coloring all this damn fire, and it has a pretty neat look to it! I redid the last page of chapter 1 with the new speedy fire brush:


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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection
« Reply #78 on: November 27, 2013, 02:52:10 PM »
I agree with UMH.  I had the same reaction.  I thought the original looked great.  But the look of this latest batch really shows off your evolution as an artist.  ...but, personally, I'm not a fan of the "fire brush."  :dunno:
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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection
« Reply #79 on: November 27, 2013, 03:00:48 PM »
I like the firebrush better. It makes it look even more high-quality and expensive to make  :lol
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"The quantity of money becomes to an ever greater degree its sole effective quality. Just as it reduces everything to its abstract form, so it reduces itself in the course of its own movement to quantitative being. Excess and intemperance come to be its true norm."

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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection
« Reply #80 on: November 27, 2013, 03:03:22 PM »
I like the firebrush better. It makes it look even more high-quality and expensive to make  :lol
Which is silly, since using the firebrush takes about a quarter of the time as painstakingly drawing the fire out!

Which is why I'm going to keep using it :lol

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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection
« Reply #81 on: November 30, 2013, 08:30:08 AM »
It's finally the weekend after the most horrible week of working in retail! :D

I should be able to finish the next part of Duncan today provided I don't distract myself too much. Like what I'm doing right now.

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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection
« Reply #82 on: November 30, 2013, 10:17:32 PM »
Here it is, Chapter 2! I wanted to use another suggestion or two, but this ended up going on too long, SO HERE IT IS.

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Going to work on making the credits page a bit prettier next time! For now I rushed it and threw that on just to get this thing done :lol

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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection [CHAPTER 2 UP]
« Reply #83 on: November 30, 2013, 10:19:57 PM »
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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection [CHAPTER 2 UP]
« Reply #84 on: November 30, 2013, 11:09:05 PM »
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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection [CHAPTER 2 UP]
« Reply #85 on: November 30, 2013, 11:34:21 PM »
I'm so happy, so fucking happy.


Duncan should quiz the fire elemental to  see who set the town on fire...
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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection [CHAPTER 2 UP]
« Reply #86 on: November 30, 2013, 11:38:39 PM »
Love Chapter 2! :tup

And you used my suggestion.

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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection [CHAPTER 2 UP]
« Reply #87 on: November 30, 2013, 11:58:31 PM »
Awesome, awesome, awesome.

Petunia should definitely put a foot up Duncan's rear for even suggesting the offering, though. Like see if she can kick a field goal with him.
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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection [CHAPTER 2 UP]
« Reply #88 on: December 01, 2013, 12:11:58 AM »
Good work Liam :clap:
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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection [CHAPTER 2 UP]
« Reply #89 on: December 01, 2013, 12:12:44 AM »
Awesome chapter 2!

Challenge the Lord of Flame to see how you can stop the fire.  (psssst: yatzee!)
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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection [CHAPTER 2 UP]
« Reply #90 on: December 01, 2013, 07:29:06 AM »
Tell the little fire golem to suck up all of the fire in Peacewood and become a MEGA GOLEM. Then singe Petunia's clothes off.
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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection [CHAPTER 2 UP]
« Reply #91 on: December 01, 2013, 07:33:31 AM »
Tell the little fire golem to suck up all of the fire in Peacewood and become a MEGA GOLEM. Then singe Petunia's clothes off.
Speak up, I can't hear you.


In other news, in my spare time when I was tired of drawing, I've been working on bringing Duncan to the third dimension!

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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection [CHAPTER 2 UP]
« Reply #92 on: December 01, 2013, 07:35:54 AM »
Alright alright, how much for the decorative Duncan bust that I can put on my end table?
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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection [CHAPTER 2 UP]
« Reply #93 on: December 01, 2013, 08:17:14 AM »
I like Chapter two.

I'd like to second this:

Duncan should quiz the fire elemental to  see who set the town on fire...
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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection [CHAPTER 2 UP]
« Reply #94 on: December 01, 2013, 11:44:43 AM »
I'm thinking the fire elemental should challenge all of the other fire to a fist fight and knock the flames unconscious. 

I don't know why I'm thinking this, but it's what I'm thinking, so.
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Re: Duncan's Adventure [CHAPTER 2 UP] [NOW ON REDDIT]
« Reply #95 on: December 01, 2013, 02:32:32 PM »
I'm starting to post Duncan on Reddit now, I could use all of your support to get me noticed!

http://www.reddit.com/r/comics/comments/1rv1r7/oc_duncans_adventure_the_chooseyourown_adventure/

http://www.reddit.com/r/DuncansAdventure

Upvotes pls. Sidenote: if you've never used Reddit before, registering is super easy and only takes 20 seconds (you don't need to email verify or anything).

Edit: I will still be posting here by the way!
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Re: Duncan's Adventure [CHAPTER 2 UP] [NOW ON REDDIT]
« Reply #96 on: December 01, 2013, 03:11:55 PM »
Holy shit. I'd never seen your stuff before and I just read the first series. This is beyond epic.  :hefdaddy :hefdaddy :hefdaddy

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Re: Duncan's Adventure [CHAPTER 2 UP] [NOW ON REDDIT]
« Reply #97 on: December 01, 2013, 03:18:00 PM »
gave you an upvote and subscribed to your sub!
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Re: Duncan's Adventure [CHAPTER 2 UP] [NOW ON REDDIT]
« Reply #98 on: December 01, 2013, 04:28:02 PM »
Upped, subbed, and posted.
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Re: Duncan's Adventure [CHAPTER 2 UP] [NOW ON REDDIT]
« Reply #99 on: December 01, 2013, 04:29:25 PM »
Thanks guys :D

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Re: Duncan's Adventure [CHAPTER 2 UP] [NOW ON REDDIT]
« Reply #100 on: December 02, 2013, 02:32:38 AM »
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« Reply #101 on: December 02, 2013, 07:35:52 AM »
 :rollin

Simply awesome  :rollin
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Re: Duncan's Adventure: The Resurrection [CHAPTER 2 UP]
« Reply #102 on: December 02, 2013, 08:40:18 AM »
In other news, in my spare time when I was tired of drawing, I've been working on bringing Duncan to the third dimension!
My first time working with Sculpey, learning as I go. It's SO HARD to keep his massive head balanced properly :lol

Way back when I used to use Sulpey, I often found it necessary to build a wire framework to hold standing figures or unbalanced characters. It didn't need to be to fancy, simple copper wire twisted into a rough semblance of the sculpture worked wonders.

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