A Ghost From The Past [original composition]

[TimelessSymphony]

hey everyone, tonight i've made another song that was based a little bit on the movie "Dark Shadows" or any other Tim Burton movies has ever released... and was also influenced by the composer Danny Elfman... so here it is and i hope you like it ...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fqt1ERIIeKI

https://soundcloud.com/willbauset/a-ghost-from-the-past

[ValentinBk]

I liked your compozition, but its way too short and doesnt seem to be going anywhere.
Have you considered writing music with other people? Having a second (or third, fourth..) opinion can turn a good compozition to a friggin awesome one.

[theseoafs]

Valentin's got the right idea. You had some cool sounds and a cool musical idea or two, but the piece doesn't go anywhere. There's no progression; it stays exactly the same all the way through.

As-is, it sounds like the introduction to a much longer piece, and not a standalone work.

[GasparXR]

I actually really like this; you have great compositional skills, but I imagined some parts in the second half to have some timpani and cymbals crescendoing into small explosions with the music, I think that would fit the piece. And as others said, it sounds like an intro to a longer piece; maybe even some sort of prog metal epic?

[Xarakas]

I also like this very much, its theatrical music

It would really fit with a mellow scene in a movie

[tartarus250]

that was great left me wanting more very atmospheric :-)