I worked on it some more between work this week.. I think it's coming along pretty well. This version sounds better than the first one.. I didn't realize youtube let's you upload big ass wav files and used a crappy converter the last time.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IxRaOkF-UWU&feature=youtube_gdata
Wow, that's really cool man! Sounds like you definitely have some songwriting skills. I'd love to hear you do a version with real instrumentation!
(BTW, some of the keyboard patches remind me of JR... in a GOOD way!)