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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #35 on: September 26, 2011, 06:33:38 PM »
Oh man lots of different suggestions this time :lol

I'll be thinking about it at work, update in the morning as usual.

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #36 on: September 26, 2011, 06:38:56 PM »
Wear the helmet.  Take the axe.  And ignore the village and instead cause mayhem in the surrounding countryside.

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #37 on: September 26, 2011, 09:27:44 PM »
I'm getting ahead of the story here, but after Kevin is created, and the first fire golem "hops" away; Duncan, Karp, and Kevin turn back to find the village now in ruins, so they set off to find the Count of Tuscany who has the power to restore the village and set things right.

Once the quest begins and they are on their journey, Karp and Kevin are quickly seduced by a couple of sirens and tell Duncan they will catch up with him later, while they stay to get their freak on for a while.  :lol  So Duncan now has to continue on the quest for now alone, but undaunted.
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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #38 on: September 26, 2011, 09:35:40 PM »
This thread <3
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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #39 on: September 26, 2011, 10:08:24 PM »
I'm getting ahead of the story here, but after Kevin is created, and the first fire golem "hops" away; Duncan, Karp, and Kevin turn back to find the village now in ruins, so they set off to find the Count of Tuscany who has the power to restore the village and set things right.

Once the quest begins and they are on their journey, Karp and Kevin are quickly seduced by a couple of sirens and tell Duncan they will catch up with him later, while they stay to get their freak on for a while.  :lol  So Duncan now has to continue on the quest for now alone, but undaunted.
One step at a time please :lol

I already have a very basic story planned by the way, and a few characters. The problem is just getting to it with all the random fucking around Duncan inevitably does following DTF's commands :lol

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #40 on: September 27, 2011, 07:35:50 AM »
Just a small update right now, a bit prematurely. Working on the rest of this chapter now, just hitting a couple snags and felt like throwing out a little bit of it for you guys while I finish up the rest. So no suggestions right now, just be good boys and girls and wait for the rest of your update (which I'm attempting to get done before going to bed).



I kinda liked the orc guy :'(

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #41 on: September 27, 2011, 07:39:33 AM »
YAY you chose my quote  :biggrin:

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #42 on: September 27, 2011, 09:44:49 AM »
Ok here's the rest! Still not a very long chapter, I spent a lot of time art wanking on this one, so to speak :lol. Anyway, I'm attempting to advance the plot now:





1. Help Duncan remember his friend's name.
2. WHAT DO?!

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #43 on: September 27, 2011, 10:25:17 AM »
Challenge the orc king to a game of Yahtzee to determine who gets Petunia (her name is Petunia)

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #44 on: September 27, 2011, 10:42:11 AM »
Challenge the orc king to a game of Yahtzee to determine who gets Petunia (her name is Petunia)

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #45 on: September 27, 2011, 11:01:44 AM »
Challenge the orc king to a game of Yahtzee to determine who gets Petunia (her name is Petunia)
OMFG yes.
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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #46 on: September 28, 2011, 08:14:18 PM »
Alrighty, sorry about no update this morning, decided to take a little break. BUT ITS OK, because I have no work tonight or tomorrow, so tons of time for Duncan'ing. Anywho, just started the next chapter, here's one page while I finish it up.



Epic Yahtzee battle soon to come. Feel free to suggest any lines for Duncan to say while yahtzee'ing his opponent into submission.

Oh and I like the name Petunia by the way, good call.

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #47 on: September 28, 2011, 08:19:55 PM »
Fucking epic. I can't wait for this. Can't think of any lines of dialogue, but a phallic joke about a Large Straight would be pretty funny.
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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #48 on: September 28, 2011, 08:23:12 PM »
By the way, I have no idea how to actually play Yahtzee, so there may be a slight delay while I perform some research :lol

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #49 on: September 28, 2011, 08:24:42 PM »
By the way, I have no idea how to actually play Yahtzee, so there may be a slight delay while I perform some research :lol
Damn, you're missing out. That game is fun as shit.

It's also kind of confusing. Feel free to challenge him to a card game of War instead.
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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #50 on: September 28, 2011, 08:24:42 PM »
I'd like to see the Orc King guy put on little reading glasses and be very polite throughout the game. I can't think of any lines though.

I love Yahtzee. :biggrin:
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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #51 on: September 28, 2011, 08:25:22 PM »
By the way, I have no idea how to actually play Yahtzee, so there may be a slight delay while I perform some research :lol
Damn, you're missing out. That game is fun as shit.

It's also kind of confusing. Feel free to challenge him to a card game of War instead.
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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #52 on: September 28, 2011, 08:31:50 PM »
I'd like to see the Orc King guy put on little reading glasses and be very polite throughout the game.
Yes.  :lol

Another potentially fun angle would be to have the orc be a fucking Yahtzee expert and kick Duncan's ass at it.
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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #53 on: September 28, 2011, 11:28:41 PM »
Duncan - "My large straight (wink, wink, nudge, nudge, say no more) beats your full house."
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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #54 on: September 28, 2011, 11:35:00 PM »
I want the orc to add a stipulation to the game - IT'S BOGGLE YAHTZEE. He shall add a bunch of letter dice to the game, and they shall play the most convoluted and non-sensical variant of Boggle/Yahtzee ever seen. It must include at least one person saying "YOU SUNK MY BATTLESHIP".
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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #55 on: September 29, 2011, 12:16:47 AM »
Love those last two suggestions, but unfortunately I was a bit too far into this already to implement either :lol

Anyway here's the latest, it took WAY too long but I like it.






Now Duncan needs a cool one liner to say, and I need to stop drawing for a little while

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #56 on: September 29, 2011, 12:49:11 AM »
I love it. :lol

And one liners aren't really my thing. But make him put on sunglasses when he says it. :hat



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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #57 on: September 29, 2011, 04:48:44 AM »
YAHTZEE MONTAAAAAGE!
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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #58 on: September 29, 2011, 05:06:00 AM »
New sig :neverusethis:

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #59 on: September 29, 2011, 05:11:26 AM »
That was on House a couple of times. I think.




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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #60 on: September 29, 2011, 05:36:59 AM »
The montage pic is fucking priceless.  :rollin :rollin :rollin :rollin :rollin

One-liner: Something about "You've got no game".
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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #61 on: September 29, 2011, 10:43:31 AM »
"Mess with me, you know it's going to be a dicey affair, Evil Guy"

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #62 on: September 30, 2011, 08:26:45 AM »
Still following with great interest; I'm just fairly uncreative when it comes to ideas.

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #63 on: October 01, 2011, 08:16:37 AM »
Annd we're back!




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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #64 on: October 01, 2011, 09:55:52 AM »
Perfect sunglasses. :heart


As for the story:
Introduce Petunia to Karp. Look around the village for inspiration on what to do next, maybe?

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #65 on: October 01, 2011, 10:39:48 AM »
Sexytime.
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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #66 on: October 01, 2011, 11:10:32 AM »
Duncan discovers he is gay.


No, not a stupid joke.

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #67 on: October 01, 2011, 12:07:08 PM »
She turns out to be a succubus.

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #68 on: October 01, 2011, 12:26:24 PM »
on the subject of the fire demon: good job america, you have once again put to death a man with no trial and no evidence of his guilt.

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Re: Choose Your Own Adventure Comic Extravaganza v. Duncan's Amazing Journey
« Reply #69 on: October 01, 2011, 03:43:43 PM »
also, my bid for story advancement:


find a survivor in the town who might have seen who set everything on fire and which direction they came from maybe??