hey guy's well i want to know how to write dark poetry because since i don't go to school anymore and i need something to keep me occupied and to help my writing in english.... i just want to post a little preview of my writing and give me some tips if it's good, bad, or cheesy:P...
Inside Me (working title)....
There is something inside me,
I cannot describe what it is,
It seem invisible to me but everyone can see it
It unleashed something,
Something that everyone are afraid,
Afraid to be dead,
I can see it in their eyes,
A tear rolled down on my cheek,
Because i can't take it anymore,
I need to be somewhere,
So everyone can forget anymore
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so what do you guy's think?
Topic: Dark poetry? (Read 963 times)
