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Skyline (revision 1)
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Re: My Newest / Best Song! Including 4 or 5 kickass guitar solos!
« Reply #1 on: May 25, 2009, 12:05:12 AM »
Solid metal/rock instrumental. Am I correct in assuming that you used a drum machine or other program for the drums?

EDIT: The ending seemed rather abrupt to me, but perhaps I wasn't listening carefully enough.
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Re: My Newest / Best Song! Including 4 or 5 kickass guitar solos!
« Reply #2 on: May 25, 2009, 09:02:23 AM »
Solid metal/rock instrumental. Am I correct in assuming that you used a drum machine or other program for the drums?

EDIT: The ending seemed rather abrupt to me, but perhaps I wasn't listening carefully enough.
Yeah, I used a program called Drumsite that uses pretty awesome samples
The ending was pretty abrupt because the song's not technically finished  :lol
I did add more to the end since then (haven't uploaded it) and it's a bit better, but I don't think the song will be complete till I make it about 11 minutes (I draw much inspiration from dt  :laugh:)

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Re: My Newest / Best Song! Including 4 or 5 kickass guitar solos!
« Reply #3 on: May 26, 2009, 09:13:01 AM »
I really liked it:

Feedback ( Per your request )

1.  Double/triple tracked stuff, sounded a little off

2.  Heard a good portion of timing issues

3.  Love the slow builds and how you let the music breathe

4.  Like the panning ( L to R ) on the slow builds

5.  I would give the kick a little more in the mix

6.  Careful of the stuff a real drummer can't physically do.  Like the slow ride with the 64th notes on the hi-hat.  :-)


Over all, kickass solos and with a little pollish, will great!!

Mike